docs: Reword android section

doc/sources/guide/android.rst

@@ -3,21 +3,21 @@
 Kivy on Android
 ===============
 
-We want to thanks Renpy Tom for beeing able to run pygame on android,
-with his `Pygame Subset for Android <http://renpy.org/pygame/>`_ project.
+We want to thank Renpy's Tom for being able to run pygame on android,
+using his `Pygame Subset for Android <http://renpy.org/pygame/>`_ project.
 
-The changes made from his project are :
+We made some changes to his project to be able to use it with Kivy:
 
-- Support of multitouch event
+- Support for multitouch events
 - OpenGL ES 2.0 surface
 - Include more Python modules
-- Removing main() function and use __main__ hack.
+- Removed main() function and use __main__ approach
 - Various enhancements on the build system for Kivy
 
 Introduction to the Kivy Launcher
 ---------------------------------
 
-The Kivy launcher is an application to run any kivy examples stored on your
+The Kivy launcher is an application to run any Kivy examples stored on your
 SD Card from android. See :ref:`androidinstall`.
 
 Your application must be saved into::
@@ -26,22 +26,24 @@ Your application must be saved into::
 
 Your application directory must contain::
 
-    main.py # <-- Your main application file
-    android.txt # <-- Some indication for running your application
+    # Your main application file:
+    main.py
+    # Some infos Kivy requires about your app on android:
+    android.txt
 
-The `main.py` is the same as your original code. If you want to support android,
-you must change the __main__ line to::
+The file `main.py` is the same as your original code. If you want to support
+android, you must change the __main__ line to, though::
 
     if __name__ in ('__main__', '__android__'):
         YourApp().run()
 
-The `android.txt` can contain::
+The file `android.txt` must contain::
 
     title=<Application Title>
     author=<Your Name>
     orientation=<portrait|landscape>
 
-Status of the project
+Status of the Project
 ---------------------
 
 Missing providers:
@@ -53,12 +55,18 @@ Missing providers:
 Missing features:
 
 - Keyboard mapping for main button
-- Keyboard support in future TextInput widget
+- Keyboard support in TextInput widget
 - Ability to hook app on sleep/wakeup
 - Ability for an application to have a settings screen
 
-Working devices
----------------
+Tested Devices
+--------------
+
+These Android devices have been confirmed working with Kivy. If your
+device is not on the list, that does not mean that it is not supported.
+If that is the case, please try running Kivy and if it succeeds let us
+know so that we can update this list. Note, however, that your device has
+to support at least OpenGL 2.0 ES.
 
 - Motorola Droid 1
 - Motorola Droid 2